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Comfortable
They sit on a brown plaid picnic blanket,
apart from the world,
surrounded by the remnants of their breakfast:
bagel crumbs and a Bruegger's cream cheese container
and a half-filled canteen of hot green tea.
She leans into his embrace, resting her head
in the hollow between his collarbone and breast.
Her right arm hugs the curve of his lower back;
her fingers tenderly trace and retrace the line of a seam
on the hip of his worn Levi's.
With the toe of her dirty blue Sketchers,
she toys with the lid of the picnic basket,
pushes it up, lets it drop, pushes it up.
She watches the clouds;
one resembles a lopsided heart,
and the rose-edged clouds on the horizon
herald a magnificent sunrise.
His left arm holds a cozy afghan
snugly around her shoulders,
to help keep the early-morning chill from seeping in.
His chin rests lightly on the crown of her head,
and with half-closed eyes he watches
the lines of sunlight moving back and forth
across a glossy lock of her newly almond-brown hair.
He wraps and unwraps it around his ring finger,
and he wonders how to tell her
that she was just as beautiful before.
- by Emily Stanton |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/02/2010 |
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- Title: Comfortable
- Artist: Emily Stanton
- Description: A love poem I spent some time writing and revising for a creative writing course. Copyright 2008. Please don't reuse this poem without my permission (just ask me, I'll most likely say yes).
- Date: 09/02/2010
- Tags: comfortable
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Casca 7 - 09/10/2010
- It's very lovely. Nice use of images and detail. Good luck in your course. I hope you get/got high marks. ^_^
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