Wake me

• Artist: Rawr Loves Yew
• Description: This was one of my ' 5 Minute on the run' poem xD I agree it could be better, but I like the way it came out.
• Date: 10/07/2010
• Tags: wake

Wake me,
I am lost in this sleep,
Too great to be true,
Too perfect,
It's you.
Your every breath,
Is to be laid to rest,
Your tears are mine to catch,
Stay with me Tonight,
Stay in my arms,
Until I wake up,
Till I sleep,
Stay.
I reach for you,
I'm alone each second,
Without you.
Take me,
Forever,
Wake me.

Comments

[Rawr Loves Yew]

But its unique though xD

[NakedJack]

Too great, too perfect; Wrong, 'To'. Oh, and dropping the rhymes in the middle, that is lazy. lol Desperate cries for a partner to sleep in the bed with you. But it's wordy, and you come off as trying to hard, thus fake. You make me recent you for complaining so hard, without real emotions behind it. You just want to get this partner in bed. I see what you are getting, I know what I like about it now.