This Love I Bleed....

• Artist: BunnyLollie
• Description: This was a poem I wrote about the feelings I have for a special someone. This was how he acted too, still acts this way but I love him very much. Actually his gotten better, but I don't care I love him. Yes I'm happy to say his mine now, took a year but we're together. Happy to say his been mine for a 1yr & 3mths. So anyway I found this old peom of mine and thought I'd share it. I hope you enjoy this poem, please comment and rate. Thank you!
• Date: 10/21/2010
• Tags: love bleed

Tall and handsome, he struck my heart.
Dark eyes glaring, even Death flees.
Won't you ever notice, this love I bleed.

Everyone hates him, but not me.
Oh dear knight, why can't it be.
Won't you hear this love I bleed.

Pushes those away, I'm far back.
Still hoping away, he'll pull me close.
Won't you hold this love I bleed.

Dark knight please, take me away.
Upon that horse, steal this love.
Won't you cage this love I bleed.

Vanishing from Life, he left heartache.
Suddenly comes home, still avoids me.
Won't you heal this love I bleed.

Slowly I wither, he won't love me.
Waiting for you, please find me.
Won't you save this love I bleed.

Falling to darkness, pleading Death wait.
But times up, Death's kiss comes.
Won't you claim this love I bleed.

Death's final act, lips nearly touch.
Please Knight hurry, time is short.
Won't you plead for this love I bleed.

Soft spoken words, Death won't wait.
I love you Knight, Please kiss me.
Won't you accept this love I bleed?

Comments

[BunnyLollie]

oh thank you. Yes I'm glad he finally accepted me. We're both so very happy.

[Traceur Ehren]

How beautiful! I love the progression. While reading I was so eager to see how you'd express the next phase! lol Great job with the writing, and on nabbin your beloved man at last! X]