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A hearts fate
Just one more dance
but it's probably too late
only one last chance
of my predetermined fate
There is just no more
it's only my dreams
standing at the door
is it all it seems?
The heart will break
shattered beyond repair
for all's at stake
In eternal despair
The heart may beat
but nothing's there
eyes cold as sleet
they only stare
the mind with no thought
with no will inside
using it as he fought
time to step aside
it's not over yet
the heart will break and bend
and the heart will bet
for in time it may mend
Hope will give another chance
a change of fate
more then one hollow dance
it's not too late
- by Shadow Wolf Zero |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/22/2010 |
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- Title: A hearts fate
- Artist: Shadow Wolf Zero
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Description:
pretty much a piece I wrote a couple days ago, just based on some experiences of mine turned creative writing
it's actually my first published poem, and my first written one in a year or so
criticism welcome obviously, try not to be too harsh :) - Date: 10/22/2010
- Tags: hearts fate
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Comments (1 Comments)
- canDy-piNk19 - 10/23/2010
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I loved this one too! its soo deep~
^ ^ 5 stars~ - Report As Spam