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My soul, an invisible string, calls me to you pulling me towards your love
My lips waiting, Baby I`ll be waiting, for the right one to kiss them with passion
My heart loves to hear the strong and steady rhythm of yours, my lifeline, it beats for you
If I can`t hear your heart beating, you`re too far away…
My body longs to feel your warmth, your skin pressed up against mine
Nothing but the soft sound when you breathe in, while I breathe out
My hands want to feel the comfort of yours, knowing that you`ll never let me go
Entwined with you forever and always
But my mind is the only thing that can see some sense
You know I can`t have them both, though how much I wish I did!
My head says, “It`s crazy. Get a grip girl!”
I should listen to it, but I never was good at taking advice
Wishing, wanting, mine for the taking
Waiting for me to sweep in and make my choice of them
Honestly I don`t know what to do, I know what I should do
But it`s not what I want
For I am talking about two people, whom I both care about deeply
I don`t know what to do, who to choose and who to push away
Any of the options, leads to such dismay
Can I really stand breaking any one of their hearts?
I wish they knew what was really going on inside of me
But no, I cannot ever let them see
For they are the two guys who seem like they are both meant for me
I love you so much…and I know that you love me too
- by Ranger Aqua |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/09/2010 |
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- Title: I am in love...with two guys
- Artist: Ranger Aqua
- Description: I know that I am not really good with poems XD but please give me some feedback ;o. It`s just about a girl who realizes that she loves two different guys. haha that girl is going to get into such a messXP
- Date: 11/09/2010
- Tags: love guys cheating
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Comments (2 Comments)
- azaycer - 10/12/2013
- I read the first stanza and immediately wanted to vomit. You've taken something cliché and put into a poem making it even more cliché and then it ended up as a tasteless piece of writing. It would have been better to separate the girl's feelings into two stanzas or parts for each guy and then bringing the reader to some epiphany. However, it did come from the heart and even though this poem represents what's wrong with teenage girls it's a valiant effort. 2/5
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- Slinkenhofer - 12/01/2010
- This would make a good song 4/5
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