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bitterness of the trees
an the whistling of the breeze
wish i could grow a stem
an be a apple on a tree
- by thismotherduck |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/24/2010 |
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- Title: new life
- Artist: thismotherduck
- Description: life
- Date: 11/24/2010
- Tags: life
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Comments (3 Comments)
- OtherwiseDevine - 01/01/2011
- Doesnt really make sense ? I dont get the concept. I dont even think there is one ... Maybe if you made the last sentence make sense ans the last word rhyme ? 1/5 .
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- action3000 - 12/04/2010
- You did not make sense you wasnt deep but it did not matter.It seem like all you do is want to rhyme so i give you a 1
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- pink Maylin - 11/27/2010
- i like apples smile
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