Walking aimlessly beneath the dark blanket of sky
We were holding hands not wondering why
The breath from our lungs was warm and seemed to linger
In the space before our eyes while we tightened fingers.
That's how you and I were at best,
Lovers groping for one another's caress.
But at worst we were like long-time enemies
An impassioned whirlwind of fury like from some movie's scene.
Even though we brought out the worst in one another,
We were still two teenage lovers watching our warm breath hover
In the sky before our jaded eyes filling our heads with lies
Like we'd be together forever just like in the novels we strive
To be like. And all I can say now is that maybe our parents were right
to tell us that in this world our love doesn't always win the fight.
- Title: Young Lovers' Fantasies
- Artist: Miss Shoot
- Description: A short poem about teenage love. I don't know if it's done yet or not. This is like my first time seriously writing a poem so I'd like to hear any feedback. Plus I'm new on Gaia so it'd be nice to get some tips on how to get rid of my noob status. :P
- Date: 01/23/2011
- Tags: love teens romance young
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