Let me...

• Artist: Lost angel-XxX
• Description: I had wrote this all on my own. But my insperation came from Comatose by Skillet.
• Date: 05/01/2011
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This feeling, It's horrible.
I can't fight it, not possible.
Every night I go to sleep,
Wishing you will be here when I wake.

Just a touch, from you to me,
Is all I need to stay, it's all I'm missing.
But all the time's when I hide,
I slip away from you.

I just wanna wake up,
With the sight of you in my eyes.

I don't feel alive,
I just want to feel your presense.
I take the pain,
And that only you can heal

I don't wanna sleep, I don't wanna dream.
'Cause my dreams don't comfort me.
Only the way you make me feel.

The agony kills,
From being away from you.
I have never doubted you,
Don't worry.

My demons lay,
Justs waiting for me to fall.
But now i live.

You open my eyes,
Let me breathe,
Let me hold you,
This is all I ask.

Comments

[ScarletNguyen]

Just wanted to say I love Skillet! Awesome band! You said you wrote this all on your own but isn't the fifth stanza straight from Comatose by Skillet?? Btw...the lyrics are "I don't wanna sleep, I don't wanna dream 'cause my dream don't comfort me the way you make me feel..."; you put "Only the way you make me feel". I give a 3/5 stars. //_^

[Night Dreamer Mystery]

(2) Your stanzas were appropriately separated with each one having its own purpose and effect, I love the way they each had their own lingering message. The only thing that bothers me is that there's one lowercase "i" and "heal" does not have a period after it. But otherwise, outstanding! and I'm not just saying so because it's something similar to what I'd write! ;D

[Night Dreamer Mystery]

Oh my gosh cry Very relatable. I like how you kept it all very simple, nothing difficult to understand. And I also appreciate the way you crafted your words to convey the honest need and longing expressed by the speaker.