Bright Eyes

• Artist: EL of Major Cosplay
• Description: Well... I can write better, but I'm not sure if this one would pass or not. Please don't put really hurtful comments, 'cause I have feelings, too. :P
• Date: 05/28/2011
• Tags: bright eyes poetry

I've never seen such bright eyes
Brighter than the sun rise

So much to say,
but nothing comes out
The shade of that color,
just screams and shouts

The eyes break mirrors
Vision becoming clearer

Looking forward,
no looking back
You begin to shatter,
with the contact

So much there feeling
But not so human being

So much to say,
but nothing comes out
Now so blury,
just like the clouds

Comments

[EL of Major Cosplay]

I dunno. XD Sorry 'bout that.

[Irenex3]

The eyes break mirrors? Isn't that a bad thing? Like a mirror cracking when it sees your face kind of thing? 'Blury' is spelled 'Blurry.'. It's an okay poem... I guess.