Abhor

• Artist: Aomere
• Description: I was in a pretty bad mood when i wrote this so please no negative feed back only constructive criticisms but nothing to harsh and yes it was directed to someone. But please post what you think its about ill tell you if its right. So enjoy....XD
  
  Oh and this is my first poem ever.....that i didnt have to do yeah.
• Date: 06/15/2011
• Tags: abhor

Have you ever felt hated or even deliberated,
B*ll's cut off,
Jaw chopped off,
To hated to say a thing,
To angered bring,
My self to say,
Your a punk that couldn't go hard,
A disease that couldn't go far,
You make her cry,
You make her wish she could die,
You live for this moment,
I would rather die then be here at the moment,
Is that all you can do, I mean,
Look at me with your helpless gleam,
Your a child nothing more,
Nothing less,
I'm just sick of this mess,

Comments

[Zlae]

You don't need to censor 'balls'. You may have used them in a... different context, but you didn't need to censor them, at all, aha.