Moonlit Path

• Artist: cookieeaterq
• Description: Just a poem :P i think its pretty choppy and bad.... but yeah :)
• Date: 07/07/2011
• Tags: moonlit path

I’m the lonely night sky and you’re the moon gives me my light.
The light that shown down on the path, the path that changes it’s scenery but never the path it’s self
The scenery might change from a lush meadow full of life to a dark graveyard.
There might even see people when you’re on the path .
Some have vibrant smiles, others mischievous smirks, or even threatening stares.
You have to figure out what it all means because all people are all different
On the path there are obstacles that must be overcome or you’ll never move forward.
You will never get move forward if you dwell in the past.
You are my light, please help me see my path.
Guide me through the horrors of life and show me the beauty.
Follow me until the end, be my inspiration to keep on walking.

Comments

[Shadow(AoD)]

It's not all that bad. I liked it, the concept was a great idea. Work on it some and it should get better.