I am old beyond my years

• Artist: Dagon000
• Description: coment and rate please
• Date: 01/12/2012
• Tags: beyond years saddness

I am old beyond my years

The company I keep
The friends I have
I imagine into being.

I am old beyond my years

Just to feel something
Just to be human
I have embraced my darkest demons.

I am old beyond my years

To be whole once more
To be happy again
I will become insane.

I am old beyond my years

Comments

[Dagon000]

@egoxromantic, live a few years alone with little to no direct human and it well become clear.
@And-That-Is-Eternity, your right, the end dose need some work, thank you.

[egoxromantic]

I feel like your point isn't clear.
I can't figure out what you're trying to say.
And that's never good.

[pariah-kid]

I love this, although I'm not wild about the final repetition at the end. It doesn't feel final enough, if you know what I mean. But this is really good, I like it a lot.