I See You

• Artist: Donique Smile
• Description: I'm would love some of your critique on my poem since i want to submit it to a competition. please be honest and truly critical in your opinions. I don't really have an explanation for this poem since it created itself in my head out of no where and within afew minutes it was completed. what i can say is at the time I was thinking about the story of Echo and Narcissus.
• Date: 02/28/2012
• Tags: contest narcissus echo opinion poem

Can you see me ?
I'm not dead.

Can you see me?
I'm not a voice in your head.

Can you see me?
I know you can hear me.

Can you see me?
No please don't leave me.