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  • Title: I'll Carry You Home - Irken
  • Artist: 8ut
  • Description: One of my friends told me this reminded her of an episode I've never seen, but I've never seen it, so... yeah.
    Anyways, The girl Irken fell asleep so the boy Irken is carrying her home so nothing bad will happen to her. They dun have name's yet... ^^""
    comments and ways to make it better would be much appreciated. ;3
  • Date: 01/06/2009
  • Tags: carry home irken
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Comments (5 Comments)
  • PhaedophiIer - 01/06/2009
  • cute! just a tip as you wanted above ^^. try to darken the outline of them more, to give the streaks of the blush on the girl a bit more length.maybe a bit of color would add to it? ^^.one thing, that if another tough critic (like me ^^; wink came along and viewed it they would say "if she's asleep then why is she able to hold onto his shoulders so tightly" which could be a possibility, so just to lean her in2 him more, probably her head drooping over his shoulders & arms hanging losely @ her side.
 
 
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