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moon glasses hollow,
shimmering,
shining,
sparkling,
hazing over the plastered ground,
consuming the sun that is darkening,
crumble,
crinkle,
snap,
upon the trees stored branches,
sitting amoungst the snow,
crush,
crunch,
pop,
ice below my feet,
seeking warmness upon my heart's beat,
sizzle,
boil,
fizz,
sending my heart into pearol again.
- by bribri1992 |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: Moon Glasses Hollow
- Artist: bribri1992
- Description: a winter sadness.....o well XD
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: moon glasses hollow
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Comments (5 Comments)
- dance_puppet_dance - 12/23/2008
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Beautimous!!!
Except you suck at spelling, Brianna.
But I still love your poem!! (but now you make my peotry look like crap. Thanks alot, BRIANNA!!! *grrr*)
Very....serene... - Report As Spam
- bribri1992 - 12/22/2008
- thankies^^
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- CR--Toxic - 12/22/2008
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me likelsh
<.<
5/5
cause your my friend xD - Report As Spam
- UnLukii - 12/21/2008
- its a very good example of imagery. Very good, descriptive, and different. I'm giving you a 4 because I think you can impress me more. Good Job and keep working at it.
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- sinji5959 - 12/14/2008
- OMG that is sooo beautiful! u r such a great poet!!
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