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There is a crisp breeze,
With heavy snow on the trees,
Winter is now here.
- by The Freaky Kidz |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/13/2008 |
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- Title: Winter Haiku
- Artist: The Freaky Kidz
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Description:
This is a Haiku poem that I wrote about winter, please vote fairly.
I hope that you like it!
=) - Date: 12/13/2008
- Tags: winter haiku
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Sandingom222 - 03/11/2009
- I hate to say it, but this isn't really a Haiku. In Haiku form, each verse is separated, and seem almost unrelated. In your poem, they are all connected.
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- ILoveSupermac18 - 01/28/2009
- it was really short. if u made longer it would be better.
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- The Freaky Kidz - 12/22/2008
- COMMENT!!!!!!!!!!
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- The Freaky Kidz - 12/13/2008
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Comments please
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