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The best gift of all
the love that lasts forever
the love of family
- by JayBlaze11 |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 11/25/2008 |
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- Title: The best gift of all.
- Artist: JayBlaze11
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Description:
For those of who are going to it doesn't rhyme its a haiku it doesn't have to rhyme. just sayin it now.
Happy Holidays! - Date: 11/25/2008
- Tags: best gift
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Echo Ligeia - 03/31/2010
- A touching emotion and concept. I think that more description and feeling would have done it better justice, but you get credit from me for bringing the idea forward.
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- Kokaiin-Chan - 08/20/2009
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ARE YOU KIDDING ME?!
three lines, and you paid 1000 gold to add it in, and you thought it would win?
Next time maybe.. and give more efford and you MIGHT ACTUALLY win.
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- Zynd the Lucky - 06/29/2009
- ah, ignore i will utterly kill you- people with names like that are always jerks. good haiku though.
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- i will utterly kill you - 05/30/2009
- THIS COMPLETELY STINKS. IF I COULD RATE IT FROM 0-10, I'd GIVE IT A -99999!!!!!!!!!!
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- The Running Abby - 05/27/2009
- what a sweet poem!! that was lovely darling!! biggrin
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- adryon- ladys man - 01/24/2009
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nice
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