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Snow flutters to the surface of the earth
who knows what could be happening
children asleep in their beds
adults waiting for the chimney to shake
looking up for santa clause
shakeing is the chimney
the parents shake with excitement
but sadley as the soot falls
there is no santa
just a poor dead bird
disapointed are the parents
snoring loudley are the children
the parents waiting hours
still no sight of him
waiting untill 5:30 in the morning cry
hearing the jingle of his slay on the roof eek
could it be
could it be
santa clause finaly returning question
the parents sit in their chairs pretending to sleep
as santa comes down the chimney he says
i know when your sleeping
and i know when your awake
so stop pretending
and the parents sat up
your late they said
no im not im santa murmered
the children arnt awake yet are they?
oh whispered the parents
they thought this would be
the christmas santa wouldnt arrive
but he did
and they all just laughed lol
as he put the childrens gifts under the tree
santa had come
and the parents had smiled
because this was the night
santa almost didnt come
- by BulletZombie |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 11/27/2008 |
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- Title: Santa Almost Didn't Show
- Artist: BulletZombie
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Description:
rate 5/5 O:
the night santa almost didnt come is just a short poem i wrote
about
some naughty parents waiting for santa
while the children where sleeping
and they wait for hours
and he finaly shows up
- Date: 11/27/2008
- Tags: santa almost didnt show
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Kokaiin-Chan - 08/20/2009
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Awesome, i love long poems- It means you put a lot of effort into it smile
5/5 for youuu. <3 - Report As Spam
- Shimau - 05/04/2009
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I loved it C: and so what if it's long :/
it can be as long as she wants it to be :] - Report As Spam
- laurence small version - 03/01/2009
- cool but it was too long next time make it shorter but 4/5
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- lexiluvsu1788 - 12/22/2008
- that was way to much to read but 5/5 cuz u wrote alot
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