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I sit outside
In the frigid and soft snow
Not a single sound
All is peaceful and still
Then I hear a voice
Shouting "Come inside! It's cold out there!"
It's my Momma
I must go in
To my warm house
Where my family greets me with warm hot coco and cookies
Yum!
I love the sight of my house
All decorated for Christmas
With red and green and stockings
Not one empty corner
The only sight to see is a holiday wonder
Times one thousand
I am overridden with the senses
The taste of my cookies
The sight of my home
The feeling of happiness
The joy of giving
The joy of receiving
The joy itself.
- by bobbingbob11 |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 11/29/2008 |
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- Title: The Holiday Felling
- Artist: bobbingbob11
- Description: This peom is about the feeling of the holidays and all of the sights and feelings they bring.
- Date: 11/29/2008
- Tags: feeling senses snow holidaycheer
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Comments (4 Comments)
- xMurck - 04/17/2009
- gooddddddddddddd
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- moeymoe303 - 01/31/2009
- no ofense but its kinda................ bad
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- zanzibar365 - 12/28/2008
- i agree
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- Ph34r Ryn - 12/17/2008
- Nicely done but i would not concider this a poem in any sence. 2/5. I don't wish to be rude because i love to support peopple who try and write but there is no poeatic pattern here whatso ever
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