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I run to the door,
Hurrying to get the person inside.
I throw the door open,
Snow whipping at my already-cold face,
Squinting to see their face.
Warmth comes back as the door is forced shut,
I look upon his frosty face,
Red from stinging snowflakes,
Cold from the icy wind.
He comes near me,
Smiling bright,
He wraps his frozen arms around my still-thawing body,
I am not cold though,
Something deep within me is glowing.
'I missed you'
He says in my chilled ear.
'Missed you to.'
I reply,
Shivering and smiling.
His icy breath tickles and cools my face,
And we get ready to spend our first Christmas together.
- by RosesFallingLikeRain |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 11/30/2008 |
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- Title: Spirit of Holiday Love.
- Artist: RosesFallingLikeRain
- Description: A woman waits for her new husband to come home on Christmas Eve.
- Date: 11/30/2008
- Tags: christmas holiday love happiness
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Wolf_grl_89 - 10/04/2010
- awww. cute. ^-^
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- kiari88 - 08/07/2009
- cute. i like it
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- Lil Ashalind - 03/03/2009
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i didnt really get that it was husband/wife until i read the description, but i like the short but meaningful dialogue, its really simple but exremley sweet smile
i also like how its not in the common poetical structure, not sure if you meant for it to be like it, but it reminds me of an extract form a story. Its different. 4/5 - Report As Spam
- Coldhearted-x - 02/24/2009
- well not lyk a poem but nice i give.....5
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