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I'd like to thank you,
For all the weight you rest upon my shoulders
And all the blame you cast in my direction.
For without the day of suffering
And the moments of tears,
I would not be who I am today.
So with your words,
And with your actions,
You have made me a better person.
I will never forgive you for that.
- by secretshades |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: The Weight of the Burden
- Artist: secretshades
- Description: This poem was written on a personal note. I got a lot of comments from my friends when I wrote it, so I'd like to have your feedback. Thank you.
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: weight burden forgive better
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Comments (6 Comments)
- boricua chick13 - 03/30/2009
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this is very artistic and i loved it!<3
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- urlame - 02/22/2009
- nice!!!
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- samuelismage - 01/30/2009
- real piece of art i like it
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- samuelismage - 01/30/2009
- THIS IS SICK , original piece of poetry i like this
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- rainspelled - 12/12/2008
- is it about me?? jk jk.
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- rainspelled - 12/12/2008
- its really good becca! i like it!
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