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I'm in my room all alone no one wants me, it is cold,
I look out the window to see if santa is near, if only he could grant my wish,
A family is my wish, a home with love and bless,
That is my only wish,
I love to play and dance and dine,
maybe with a family of nine,
so santa if you hear me please do help me,
to make a christmas wish, come true,
for someone to love, someone new.
-Jessiebear15
*sorry if any spellling errors*
- by iilovechuii |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: Wishing for family
- Artist: iilovechuii
- Description: A orphan wants a family so bad..here's his story
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: wishing snow
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Rinosama - 09/26/2010
- no spelling errors it great 96/5
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- SethRyan_07 - 07/22/2010
- It's great!
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- secrets_n_lys - 05/17/2009
- i think its pretty gd actualy
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- DRevan87 - 05/12/2009
- Good Job
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- Lyxek - 02/12/2009
- Pretty interestingly sad.
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- golly101 - 12/25/2008
- When you first started going with this I thought you were pretending to be a present! You know like: I am all alone in this dark lonely room, My skin is beautiful yet human still tear at it on christmas day... should spark some ideas!
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- yumi71 - 12/12/2008
- its actual sad bout the orpahn thing but awesome
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