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The children rose from the river of Hope
In bubbles shiny and new
Sun glittering down on their sparkly world
Where dreams would always come true
They floated as light as a daydream
That flutters through the mind
Each day crafted by an angel and lasting years
Free of the ropes that bind
But as the dust settled on their shimmering world
The bubbles started to sink
Dragged down by the weight of horrors endured
And memory’s putrid stink
Each year they struggle to rise again
While the air gets thicker and thicker
Straining against the tide of boredom
Their soul gets sicker and sicker
When one day they awake to the clouds of smoke
Exhaustion fumes overcome them
They’re too tired to make the bubbles rise
And they fall…like many before them
- by weezieishness |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: The Land Of Bubbles
- Artist: weezieishness
- Description: I wrote this the night before my 19th birthday. I had just found out that my family were going away for the weekend, and therefore wouldn't be there for my birthday. I was thinking about how things change as you get older, and nothing ever seems as great as it does when you're a kid. And then I started writing, and this poem came out. I'm really keen to know what you think of it...
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: land bubbles adulthood
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Comments (4 Comments)
- hsun1316 - 05/27/2009
- nice poem
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- Sarah6550 - 03/09/2009
- very nice poem..I just love it..
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- heart_of_a_butterfly - 01/11/2009
- i loved it amazing! keep writing CHICKA
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- M_Sayuri - 01/10/2009
- thats seriously awesome! And if u'd make another comparsan, that could b related to pollution! Just sayin'. ^w^ Nice though!
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