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Look a mother standing here
With her daughter coming near
She turns to see a smiling face
Returns the favor with a gleaming gaze.
And as she looks she is amazed
There is no fog nor any haze
In disbelief and in a sigh
She can't believe she's in her daughters eyes.
She looks down and she can see
A spitting image of her used to be
She falls to her knees in a moment of glee
For she never knew what she meant to thee.
In a moments notice
She knows the important
She must raise her to be
Nothing less than the women she see's.
At once she enraptures the running child
And pours her love worth all the wild
With a love so strong that she cries
All because she's in her daughters eyes.
- by Pheonix of Angels |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: In Her Daughters Eyes
- Artist: Pheonix of Angels
- Description: The idea for this poem came from when i was in class one day and the teachers daughter came in crying and rushed up to her mother who caught and soothed the sobbing child in her comforting arms. This poem is about how a simple action can change the future. In this case the action is a look at who she was and where she was heading. I hope you enjoy my work!
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: daughters eyes love mothers
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Comments (5 Comments)
- x-Midori Hana-x - 11/12/2009
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This poem is very cute
and i can feel the emotion
that this poem has. smile - Report As Spam
- davidl8ly - 06/17/2009
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Very well written, beautiful sentiment!!!
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- -Sabriinaaa- - 12/29/2008
- awww it made me cry thats so cute !!! awww i love it!!! xD! good job ur great at this. 5/5
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- Raki Ryuzaki - 12/17/2008
- That s a really nice poem...you sure have talent in writing ^^ .
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- Bloodlust458 - 12/15/2008
- aweome poem
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