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It burns when it touches bare skin
Blistering and pealing
Breaking down the body one cell at a time
Winter brings its own breed if hell
That kills one rose at a time
Depraved and atrocious
Till there’s nothing left
Calmed only by the breath
Of spring
- by Orihara_Chan |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: Snow Like Fire
- Artist: Orihara_Chan
- Description: i was bord so i randomlly wrote down stuff. im not even sure what type of poetry it is
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: snow like fire
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Axis of Fate - 06/13/2010
- Very... Festive?
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- zbelac123 - 04/09/2010
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Alright.
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- kal94 - 06/13/2009
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Beautiful
kinda depressing
but i like hte way u ended it...
with hope "calmed only by the breath
Of spring"
Nice free verse poem (:
Love the vocab:] - Report As Spam
- angelgossip99 - 05/07/2009
- I think that it is awesome!
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- WitchyGrl - 03/10/2009
- It's good. And it would be called a free verse. I go to an art school for creative writing. smile
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- Koori Odoriko - 01/16/2009
- It's more of a free form I think, but it is pretty in a dark sort of way. Very good. : )
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