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[FEMALE]
That gift you bring and dare to show
To me was not on my wishlist.
I thought you knew my heart’s desire;
Your estimate’s sorely missed.
[MALE]
This, this is a CD
Of our favourite songs - yours and mine.
Wait, wait, I think you’ll like
The thought, if not the design.
[FEMALE]
You surely put an effort in
But why not pay cash at a store?
You say you love me more than life;
Is my love not worth anything more?
[MALE]
Your name is gold to me,
And your face is of diamonds inlaid.
Yet, I hoped you’d appreciate
No store-bought gift, personally made.
[FEMALE]
I concede your reasoning;
If only you had better skill.
The wrap on my “most treasured gift”
Of a hundred would garner you nil.
[MALE]
Oh, what are such details
To a couple? (That’s you and me.)
The most perfect ribbon and lace
Holds no candle to your beauty.
- by complex_ity_ |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/13/2008 |
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- Title: Lover's Tiff (Christmas Theme)
- Artist: complex_ity_
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Description:
It's a satire of the selfishness that some people can feel at Christmas. Set to the tune of "What Child Is This?"
I couldn't keep up the cynicism, so the poem does have a happy ending however. - Date: 12/13/2008
- Tags: lovers tiff christmas theme
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Kay828 - 04/30/2010
- awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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- x-PixieChick - 10/11/2009
- well this poem made me think I like the guy but the girl is b***** but what eves I love it 5/5
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- Andrew1123 - 07/18/2009
- AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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- 202sd - 05/24/2009
- im with them its great though its more like a song or a short story that as small parts per page but was great
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- negatedreality - 01/06/2009
- It's hard to find people that will question the season in such a way. Bravo to you! 5/5
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- TDV235 - 12/22/2008
- omg that is so well i dont even know wht it is but i loved it it made my mouth drop 5/5
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