- Title: Of clouds and girls dreams
- Artist: AtrosM
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Description:
If girls are made of Sugar and spice And all things nice, then her dreams are surelly of clouds and flowers
My try to a little girl dream in Blues and Creams between the clouds - Date: 08/02/2009
- Tags: clouds girls dreams
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Starstruck_Skies - 08/03/2009
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I agree with Yami-dono-
It's a little too cluttered. - Report As Spam
- Yami-dono - 08/03/2009
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WAY too cluttered. :/
*Skips* - Report As Spam
- Artificial Smiles - 08/03/2009
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-GASP.-
Cudos to the matching.
It's just a bit cluttered.
And don't add the "My try to a little girl dream in Blues and Creams between the clouds" to your desciption. That is just practically telling us you got bored and pulls away from the poem. (: But i really like it! - Report As Spam
- Erithan - 08/03/2009
- Goodluck!
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