- Title: Nightmares
- Artist: Crystane
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Description:
Stuck in a nitemare,
crying in the night.
Screaming, from fright
I cannot fight.
Why do they torture me so
Nightmares that come and go
And continue to grow
I cannot know.
They induce such pain
My soul they drain
Am I going insane
I cannot explain.
No one to comfort me
From terrors unseen
No solace for my need
I cannot be free.
by Janet Boyd - Date: 05/23/2010
- Tags: nightmares
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Lunatalia - 05/24/2010
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I'd recommend Dark Ice on the legs, rather than the shoes you're currently wearing. They seem rather out of place.
But great job, otherwise~
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- Panic_Kiwi - 05/24/2010
- Lol at the shoes.
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- deadfr990 - 05/24/2010
- It's good But The Shoes Are.....eh.. 4/5
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- zrac123 - 05/24/2010
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Its nice and all, but then i got to the shoes and my liking of this avatar went to... meh. Simple things can ruin greatness! i know it! ;P
Heh, still get 3/5 for great poem and good together-ness.
btw, whats that backdrop? ide like to know razz - Report As Spam
- Deaths rebirth - 05/24/2010
- Perfect, just perfect 5/5
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- Axura - 05/24/2010
- I disagree with FFVII_White_Rose_Yuffie_ on your outfit. I think it's quite fitting with the whole nightmare scene. It fades like the background does and the spiders are a great touch.
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- Rikku Thiefsphere - 05/24/2010
- Oh....I thought this was good until I saw the entire lower half of the avi -- the head is fine, so is the backdrop....The rest....Well, if I'm speaking politely, it needs some work. Try again with an outfit that's a little better, and then re-submit it...I think it would turn out great if you could get something more fitting for your avi to be wearing. 2/5
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