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- Title: The Dream Creator
- Artist: tinkerboricua
- Description: A goddess roams from house to house at night, as children and adults sleep, silently without a minute to waist no matter if its dusk or dawn. She enters there thoughts and makes their dreams come to life, making sure their wishes come true and their fantasies prevail.
- Date: 01/15/2011
- Tags: dream creator tinkerboricua
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Comments (7 Comments)
- KissKissKaBoom - 01/25/2011
- I like her, but I have to agree with the face comment. The face does look a little stiff when thinking about a Goddess who creates dreams. I think if you had closed eyes, the look would have been a lot better and softer. Congrats though. :] Don't take too many of the critiques to heart - half are but hurt and the other half just comes with placing. :p
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- Sariah Lockhart - 01/25/2011
- the torso's bothersome, what with the black and strange dark creamy color. her arms look unnatural since they're just limp while her legs look as if she's leaping. gives her the look of an ostrich. XD her blank expression doesn't help.
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- Fuji_hobo_jacket - 01/25/2011
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Not gonna comment on the avi as others have.
What I'm more curious about is how you used "there" instead of "their" once and then got it right every other time. Also, waste. - Report As Spam
- pockygirl_dead - 01/24/2011
- Yaaaay! 2nd place again ^.^! Gratz <3
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- Caiesylle - 01/24/2011
- Oh my god.
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- Pikachew - 01/24/2011
- The only item that makes this avatar less of a golden cliche is the pair of legs, but she doesn't look majestic because her face is boring and stiff. Maybe lighter hair and a different expression would have helped.
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- Ariel Yardena Davidson - 01/24/2011
- i'm iffy about some of the items, but i don't think they can be easily changed (ballet legs, for example).
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