- stare A dark day will happen when were wolves and vampires and man eating mutans will roam the earth and not one mortal will survive. But I will survive and roam with the were wolves and hunt with vampires and feast on mortals with the mutants. A dark day a very dark day between april and may.
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- Title: A very dark day
- Artist: Invisible_ dark_soul_55
- Description: A little poem or story of a dark day I think would happen.
- Date: 10/12/2008
- Tags: very dark
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Comments (7 Comments)
- lovesoua - 09/11/2009
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a dark day
that sound fun...........i cant wait that day! - Report As Spam
- Sexual_Socks - 08/28/2009
- Very childish :/
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- doodie_dinosaur - 08/25/2009
- -n between April and May.
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- doodie_dinosaur - 08/25/2009
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Sorry, I'm an English major. Your construction is rather weak and you've made several careless mistakes. The concept is interesing but as far as punctuation goes, how about:
A dark day will happen when werewolves and vampires and man-eating mutants will roam the earth. Not one mortal will survive. But I will survive. And I will roam with the werewolves and hunt with the vampires and feast on mortals with the mutants. A dark day. A very dark day will happe - Report As Spam
- Wunderful_Coffee_Cup - 07/27/2009
- i like it ^-^
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- Arc En Licorne - 07/21/2009
- interesting
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- xIVooDooIx - 07/19/2009
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nice, 4/5
search me in the arenas under poetry and lyrics and comment me please! - Report As Spam
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