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A Vampire's Love
Chapter Two: The Luring Eyes
He kept staring at me, like he was looking into my sould. Then, he smiled at me. He then started to walk towards me. "Don't run. Don't worry. I'm not going to hurt you." He was now standing directly infront of me. "W..who are you?" I asked him. "My name is Alexander. And you must be Kayuki." I take a step backwards as soon as he said that. "How do you know my name?" "Kai, my cousin told me." "Oh, so you're Kai's cousin Alexander!" "Yes. I am. How old are you Kayuki?" "Eighteen." "So am I." "Why are you in the forest anyways?" I ask him. "This is one of my favorite places to relax." "Oh." Alexander was now very close tomy face. "Kai's right." "Huh?" "You are very beautiful." And then he kisses me. My eyes widen but....I couldn't pull away for some reason. "I'm sorry. I don't know what made me do that." He says looking away. I touch my lips, remembering the kiss. I had just got my first kiss from a Vampire! "For some reason, I feel like I can trust you with my very life." He says looking at me. "I want to tell you something." "Ok. What." "Kayuki, don't be afraid of me. I'm a Vampire."
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- | Submitted on 10/26/2008 |
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- Title: A Vampire's Love Chapter Two
- Artist: sakura_1258
- Description: A Vampire's Love Chapter Two: The Luring Eyes
- Date: 10/26/2008
- Tags: vampires love chapter
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Comments (7 Comments)
- A3L7 - 10/26/2008
- Awsome story!
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- Braw21 - 10/26/2008
- Im not sure how your writing this. Has it already happened and she is writing it down like memoirs or is it all happening now? It's just that the line "I had just got my first kiss from a Vampire" confuses me because alexander then tells her he is a vampire. :S
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- cantstopcrazy - 10/26/2008
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i have been reading a lot of vampire romances, so you should have saved the part about being a vampire. it is differnt but just to let you know in the US there is a story called vampire kisses where the author names her Vampire character
Alexader. here should be more drama. i give it a 4 - Report As Spam
- Sutaa Yagami - 10/26/2008
- You need to describe things more. Otherwise, it's okay...
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- xXxSoMeOnEs_A-n-G-e-LxXx - 10/26/2008
- I am attracted to so many books like this and I love it your a amazing writer don't stop writing publish books do stuff like that because that's what this type of story's are for love stories your a amazing writer please take my advise and don't stop no matter what
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- ms_Punkette - 10/26/2008
- careful with how you put things you make it difficult to see but your an amazing writer. Good work
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