A very dark day

• Artist: Invisible_ dark_soul_55
• Description: A little poem or story of a dark day I think would happen.
• Date: 10/12/2008
• Tags: very dark

stare A dark day will happen when were wolves and vampires and man eating mutans will roam the earth and not one mortal will survive. But I will survive and roam with the were wolves and hunt with vampires and feast on mortals with the mutants. A dark day a very dark day between april and may.

Comments

[iorekbyrnison]

Okay, I am NOT saying that i like it, but you would probably be better received if you first made a distinction between poetry and short story. Yes, poetry does NOT have to rhyme, but I think the problem here is that your poem seems a bit immature. When I read it, it did not feel true. It felt like a person just trying to write about something she knew nothing about. Great, you had a theme, but the best pieces of literature are about events and feelings the author actually experienced.

[Evil_Genius_Chemist]

How could any of you say that this poem is bad. A poem doesnt need to rhyme. It just needs soul. Soul is the key to poems and songs. P.S. it wont be a dark day, it will be the best day of my life. P.P.S 5/5

[XxxBananasxxX]

i agree with the sorcerer of azadaran

[samantha38]

xd soo cool and will so happen we will all see

[iiGreen-Wizard]

horrible.no poetic material at all

[lustsforblood]

nice and morbid
i like it

[Nanigenaku]

It's a cool poem and I understand it (It's so COOL because it's the about darkness)