1st Kiss

• Artist: Azraella
• Description: I wrote this at a time when I was very romantically inspired. There was a story to go with this relationship and several other poems.
• Date: 07/16/2008
• Tags: kiss1st

1st Date
1st Hug
1st Touch

My heart is beating in my chest. I am sure that he can hear.

2nd Hug
2nd Touch
1st Laugh

Drowning in his glittering red eyes. Lost completely in the moment.

1st Taste (of Lobster)
4th Sip (Of wine)
1st Giggle

Soft lights, secluded table. The music pulses in rhythm with my breathing. Shallow and sharp.

6th Sip (of wine)
1st Dance
2nd Dance

His body against mine, swaying to the music. He doesn't care who is watching.

3rd Dance
3rd Hug
1st Mouthful (of ice-cream)

Dessert is sweet, this night was wonderful. I can't stop chattering on the way home.

2nd Laugh
2nd Giggle
4th Dance

We sway to our own music, laughter ringing in the garden outside my house. Thank god for the fence.

4th Hug
3rd Touch
1st Kiss

I'm completely enraptured in that instant. His mouth pressed over mine, his body pressed to mine. His tongue, his scent, his taste. He's overpowering me, possessing me. I don't fight back...

4th Touch
5th Hug
1st Goodbye

Hopefully it's not the last.

Comments

[jazzdere]

I love this the last line. That's so poetic, and romantic. Beautiful, 5/5

[bindyblueeyes]

everytime i read this i love it more

would you please comment and rate on one or more of mine?

[ElectraShocked]

I like the way it kind of lists the order of events..1st 2nd 3rd etc.
xD. 5/5 from me!
Comment and Rate back?? (Read one of my newer ones please?)

[emmaispretty123]

this was really good! I liked it

[KIMANI113]

I really liked this^^
~Kay~

[theimmortalhunter]

i loved it ^ ^

[Dreamy babydoll33]

you got skillz girl!!!!!!!!!