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THe big bad monster is hiding in my closet i just know it!!
it freaks me out, its so scary!!
i never have the lights off cuz then it will come out
but when my parents turn the lights off
the monster starts to come out
i hear the door start to creak
so i hide under my covers
with my little flashlight
as i sit there trying not to move
i feel the sheet starting to come off of my head
i start to shake and shiver
i worry about what will happen to me
the sheet falls on the ground
and i feel something picking me up,
i scream as loud as i can
as the monster................................................................................
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picks me up and hugs me tight
i hear a quiet laugh as my father
lays me down in my bed and tucks me in
he says oh so quietly
"jackie girl, there is nothing in your closet! and if there was it is bound to be a friendly one!!"
and i say "but daddy! What if it tries to eat me???"
my father laughs
then goes over to the closet and knocks on the door and says to the closet door
"Mr. Monster, please be nice to my little girl she hasn't done anything at all to you."
i giggle and say to my daddy "Daddy Mr. Monster isnt gonna come out with you in here!"
my daddy says as he kisses my cheek "dont worry darling im sure that Mr. Monster is very friendly?."
as my daddy left, he took my flashlight with him.
The closet begins to open and i hear i quiet laugh,
and i bravely stick my head out from under the covers and say "Mr.Monster why do you hide in my closet and try to scare me every night?"
and the voice that sounds very familiar say "I don't try to scare you i want to be your friend."
i say to the monster "i dont want to be your friend i want you to leave me alone!"
i can hear the monster crying,
as it says "okay. sniff. I'll. sniff. leave you. sniff. alone"
as i realize that i've been incredibly mean to Mr. Monster
i get up out of my bed and say
"im sorry mr. monster i was very afraid of you."
the monster says "its okay and im sorry that i scared you but im not mr. monster im jake"
"oh well hello jake im jackie! its nice to meet you!"
as i see a light i see the monster
and i realize hes not a monster at all he's a boy
"oh!" i say
"i didnt realize that you where a boy!"
Jake says "would you like to come to my house to play?"
i say "sure!"
we went into my closet and walked through a portal and came upon a small house with several kiddies in its yard.
we all played together that night and when i woke up.........................................
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I was in my own bed.
- by luvmiroku123 |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 07/26/2008 |
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- Title: THe big "bad" monster
- Artist: luvmiroku123
- Description: i really dont know it popped in my head a few months back i stuck it on paper and decided that i wanted to put it up here....
- Date: 07/26/2008
- Tags: monster
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- seroth321 - 02/23/2009
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lol nice its funny smile . i give 5 stars.
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