Centaur Of Life

• Artist: XkannaboyX
• Description: Your going to like this stay tuned for part 2
• Date: 08/01/2008
• Tags: centaur

Long ago there was an animal that was half human half horse it was known as a centaur.They were a race that was pure in heart but was different and usually outcasted or murdered because to most normal powerful people different is...scary. The centaurs were close to extinction when a centaur named Arthuda made 50 men and 50 women centaurs disappear while the rest were slaughtered in many horrible ways,ways so sick that if I told you them you probably commit suicide.Arthuda was a powerful centaur who was known as the centaurs of life and unlike the others could live forever.That was 100s of decades ago when suddenly on a normal day in 1988 the centaurs woke up from a deep sleep.When he woke up he was very weak but had mended with the earth and couldnt leave the spot he was at.So it was time to name a new centaur of life.On the day he was to choose the centaur at second he was to choose a wise women named Sophillia a baby was born and he chose the baby.His name was Arthur inspired by Arthuda.
Now its the year 2008 and the centaurs.....Are back.

Comments

[Blondie_JK]

i love it
as i am a centaur
i think it does alot for the centaur kind =]
lovley
i give it a 4/5

[Dax -insert paw print-]

I like, however, there are many spelling, grammar and punctuation mistakes. Have some one proof read?

[XkannaboyX]

i messed up bad my apolidgies but please enjoy anyways

[nihil interit]

it's certainly got potential, I can give you that much...but your writing, well it needs work.

[Tenko72]

This needs a lot of work. You should write numbers out and the last line would read better if the "And" was lowercase. I like the centaur idea! Keep writing.