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"Black... Pitch black.. Where is this place?!" My voice echoed throughout the endless world of darkness.
"Heelllooo?? Is anyone here?! I think I'm lost!!" The situation seemed to be getting nowhere. I wandered around, feeling my surroundings... nothing... there was nothing! My hopes of getting out of this place seemed seldom and brought me sorrow. For all I know, I might never get out of here. Feeling helpless as I was, I began to sit myself down. Maybe... Just maybe.. Someone would pass by and help me.
"Mina?" An unfamiliar voice called out to me.
Frightened, I jumped up from my place, but yet at the same time I was greatly relieved to know someone was there.
"W..Whos' there?? Where are you?" I shouted, looking in all directions.
"Mina... Mina?" He called again, he sounded worried.
I took it as a sign and decided to follow the sound of his voice. Unsure of where I was going I kept walking. Soon enough, I began to see a bright light ahead of me with a shadow of a tall guy in the middle. I took a few steps closer and stopped, hiding myself in the darkness... or so I thought I was.
"Mina.." He stood there and reached his hand out for mine. I hesitated. I looked around to see if there was a way to get away from this stranger who had helped me. For all I know, he could be some psycho pervert.
"Come on mina, I wont hurt you. I promise."
Who is this guy? and why the heck was he being nice to me?! I squinted my eyes to see his face, but it was no use. The light from outside was blinding me.
"Come on." His voice sent shivers down my spine. The next thing I knew, I reached out for his hand too. The warmth of his hand made me blush.
What the hell is wrong with me?!
He led me out of the darkness and into the light... Wow that sounded corny.. But really he did. The bright sun was shining down on us and was killing my eyes. I stared at his back as he pulled me along. He had broad shoulders and was brawny. His skin was lightly tanned but fair. He had veins popping out of his arms a little bit, probably from working out.
Suddenly, he stopped and turned to look at me. Not really paying attention, I almost bumped into him. I looked up at him but couldnt see his face. My eyes were still sensitive. I raised my hand and covered the top part of my face, trying to block the sun light. I stared at his hair... It was the weirdest style I've ever seen so far, but yet... It looks pretty good. It was layered to his neck with bangs that brushed to the side of his face.
"Mina..."
His soothing voice made me blush, "Y..Yes?"
"Um... I.."
"Y..You..what?"
beep! beep! beep!
"W..whats that?!" I looked around as he let go of my hand.
"Its time to wake up" His voice morphed and suddenly, I felt a thud.
"WAKE UP MINA!! YOU'RE LATE!!!" My mom shouted
"W..Wha?" I rubbed my eyes. The clothes I left out for today was on top of me.
A dream..?
I crawled out of my bed and fell on the floor.
"OOF!" I stared at the floor with the image of the guy still in my head.
"What do you want for breakfast?" My mom asked, pulling me up on my feet.
I rubbed my butt with one hand and eyes with the other, "Um... Hot pocket? Since I'm late anyway.."
She then turned and left the room. I zombied off to the bathroom with my clothes and got ready for school.
"What a weird dream..." as I closed my eyes I could see him again. My heart began to race. Stunned, I opened them and realized I needed to get going. I ran down the stairs and grabbed my breakfast.
"Later mom!" I shouted as I stormed out the door.
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Hi, my name is Mina. My story began in the summer of 2005. That's when I found out my boyfriend was cheating on me. So now, is the first day of my junior year and a brand new beginning! Yeah right. Who am I kidding?
"Mina!" a voice shouted out. I turned to see Justin in his car. "Hop in!"
Justin, my best friend blah blah blah. (refer to ch.1) He's a senior now, and in June... He'll be graduating. I dont really know if I'm suppose to be happy or utterly depressed. Without him, life would be boring and sad.
"Haha, I guess we both woke up pretty late on our first day huh?" He said laughingly while driving.
"Yeaa. Guh, so dreadful."
"What? Still not over that thing, whats his name? Edward?"
"Edwin! @.@ If he was Edward from Twilight I dont think I'd be like this" I said as I scratched my head and leaned against the door with the wind blowing in my face. Justin laughed and petted my head. Soon enough, we were at school with twenty minutes to spare. Crowded and run downed, Geyser High School, probably named after that water brand... Crystal Geyser.
"Mina! Justin!" a sweet voice came calling.
"Kelly!!" I squealed as she came running. Kelly, my other best friend since the 8th grade. Probably the smartest out of the little group of 3.
"Jelly Yetti!!" Justin squealed as he jumped on his toes like a little girl and swang his arms around.
"Shut up Justin" Kelly laughed as she punched his shoulder.
"Oh my gosh, I heard what happened. Are you okay mina??" Kelly asked. Justin suddenly began walking away whistling. Guh, go figure. I grabbed the back of his shirt collar.
"Gee, thanks for telling Justin."
"Haha, no prob. See ya!" He wiggled and ran off. As I turned to Kelly, she was already glaring. As sweet as she may seem, she gets really hot headed and conceited when she's right. Also, when she holds a tennis racket, she has a totally different personality. Just thinking about it sends shivers down my spine, not in a good way I might add.
"H.. Hiii Kelllyy :3 Rawr~"
"See! I told you! I told you that he wasnt good! And look what happened!..."
Gah.. Here we go...
"...That jerk, when I see him I'm going to beat the crap out of him and @#!%!! Guh!! You dont know how angry I am at you!" she complained.
"ME?!" well, I guess she does have the right to be angry... She did warn me that he was a player. I was tired and didn't really want to listen anymore, so I looked around for a way out or an excuse to get away.
"Yes you! I told you, but noooooooo, you were too stubborn and stuck with him anywayy. Then you had to go and follow him around and catch him making out with some chick and get yourself hurt and oh my gosh! I mean I suspected him sin-"
From there I stopped listening. That was then I realized a tall brawny boy with strange hair, somehow he seemed awfully familiar.. but I knew I never met him before. He was headed to the courts to get his schedule probably, which reminded me... I needed to get mine too!
"Oh my gosh Kelly! I didnt get my schedule yet! I'll see you later kay?! Bye!!" I sprinted off after the guy.
"MINA!" Kelly yelled after me. I dont know why I was doing this, but there was something about him that drew me to him. In a few minutes I reached the courts panting. I lost him. I dont know which line he went to. Crap. I noticed the lines were according to last names.
Maybe.. It's just my imagination.
I lined myself up. Still panting, I realized the guy in front of me turned. I looked up slowly. He was wearing steel black jeans along with a khaki coat and vest. He had a gray shirt underneath. Wow, he knows how to dress. His hair was dark and layered to his neck, he had bangs that brushed to the side of his face. Thats when, I suddenly got a flashback.
THE GUY FROM MY DREAM!
------to be continued @-@------
- by CreamyMint |
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- | Submitted on 08/22/2008 |
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- Title: Mystery Man
- Artist: CreamyMint
- Description: second chapter of my story x: its not that good but yeah. first chapter is in my journal :3
- Date: 08/22/2008
- Tags: fiction romance sliceoflife
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- gifted_animator - 08/22/2008
- I love this story, I think it's a great a deep emotional story with a great background.
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