- It was a peaceful scene, a quiet grove, with a robin twittering away, and deer, cautiously poking it's head out of his thicket, free to graze in the nearby meadow. A creek babbled away, meandering through the trees. and rays of golden sunshine peeked out from behind a lazy white cloud. Then, as if breaking the silence, thunder boomed and scarred the sky till it bled with rain and moaned with a loud thunderclap. dark clouds filled the sky, as if shooing the peace and quiet away for another day.
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- | Submitted on 09/21/2008 |
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- Title: A quiet and peacful scene...
- Artist: A Splash of Color
- Description: what do you guys think?
- Date: 09/21/2008
- Tags: quiet scene peaceful
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Luminene - 04/19/2009
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Cool i guess we are both good at describing things! :3
You just gave me an idea too! biggrin thx 4 ur story! - Report As Spam
- Bleeditout93 - 04/17/2009
- this is one of the most describtive writings ive read. 5/5
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- HYEgaga - 01/31/2009
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nice story . really describbed everything . i even felt
like i was there ^^ . 5 - Report As Spam
- lalaland2106 - 09/21/2008
- It's really good! You could take this and make a good short story out of it. Maybe a full story.
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- Eclairl - 09/21/2008
- its a good poem i like it
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- A Splash of Color - 09/21/2008
- thanks i appreciate comments like urs
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- cheeeeel4624 - 09/21/2008
- i think u should turn this into a poem!! it's really good.
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