- wow i thought id be runen around eneden ppls lifes but im at a desk chosen ware souls go boring all the suden i get a envalope out of noware that said NEW REPER FIRST REAPING yay my first reaping i said so it said kill the demon triripper so i open a door and im in the human world and in front of me a black moter cycle on it a note that said from mars the god of war i got on and drove- part 3 end my manga will be out next mounth plz coment tell me wat im doing wrong plz
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- Title: new angel of death part 3
- Artist: NeverBornPain
- Description: being angle of death is boring
- Date: 10/04/2008
- Tags: angel death part
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- pew pew buddies - 04/07/2010
- GAHHHH ! PROOF READING !
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- etoile_18 - 01/21/2009
- ..wrong spelling huh!!!!
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- bro mo dat chi - 10/04/2008
- you suck at writing, stop, don't even try.
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- AsianNinja042 - 10/04/2008
- Learn how to spell. You can not succede with horrible spelling like yours.
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- animalsaverkid8 - 10/04/2008
- dude when you write a story don't use all that text stuff cause it just ruins the whole thing try writing it over and making it so people can understand cause I just quick trying to read once I looked at it.
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- Kateryna of Kyiv - 10/04/2008
- Did you hit your head wile writing this?
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- NeverBornPain - 10/04/2008
- i should use speel chek next time
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