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It was Monday he woke up like every other day sad lonely and waiting for the day to be over. He was a outcast he had no friends and was very poor. But today something felt different a new girl walked in she was very shy and didn't know anyone i think that's why she sat next to him. She was like a goddess to him red eyes red hair flawless face and a beautiful body. He finally found the courage to ask her her name she said "Asuka whats yours?" all he could say was "Bato". They spent every day together until one day she was gone. Not at her house not at school nowhere. The next day he found her tied up half naked in the park. He saved her and became enraged to find out that it was a old friend of his that did it. the power he held all that time with out knowing it began boiling up. He began glowing red and a sword came into his hand "the nightmare blade" it whispered.
This is when he began the hunt. The rage within him grew stronger by the second he found his friend and tormented him for what he did. finally the rage became so extreme that there was a explosion. He fell into his own mind and didn't know what to do that's when he sawl what his rage made a giant monster that looked like a monstosity it was black with red eyes that gazed in to your very soul and covered in what looked like the skin of people he hated. that's when he relized what was going on and that it had Asuka all he cared about right then was protecting her love and compassion were all that fueled his power the blade changed "the gardian" it whispered. it was now a sleak flexable blade that was cool to the touch with energy flooting around it. He then sawl that the monstosity weilded the nightmare blade. it swong and hit him in the shoulder a searing hot blunt knife went strate into him. It filled him with horror. that's when the gardian turned into a shield and nocked the sword right out of him. he was in the fight now. he jumped and dogged all the way to the things head and was using only love to save her that's why as he swong the monstosity just disapaered. He won but something truly evil was coming next but for now Asuka was safe and that was all he cared about
To be continued?
- by inuyasha ikari |
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- | Submitted on 10/09/2008 |
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- Title: dark rage light love
- Artist: inuyasha ikari
- Description: he found his power will he use a terrible rage or save his love
- Date: 10/09/2008
- Tags: dark rage light love
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Beastly Knight - 10/30/2008
- It's good but you should finish soon. I would like to now how it ends.
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- pumpkinpiiekat - 10/12/2008
- nice story.... u have some run on sentences though.... u shoould read my story. (it is not finished yet)
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- X-inuyashagal-X - 10/09/2008
- oh yeah plz read my story 2 if u like thanx
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- X-inuyashagal-X - 10/09/2008
- interesting wonder what's gonna happen next
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- Random Chaos Theory - 10/09/2008
- I thought it was a well written peice a few minor syntax errors but the story shows promise i hope u continue it and plese pm me when u do
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