- stare A dark day will happen when were wolves and vampires and man eating mutans will roam the earth and not one mortal will survive. But I will survive and roam with the were wolves and hunt with vampires and feast on mortals with the mutants. A dark day a very dark day between april and may.
- by Invisible_ dark_soul_55 |
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- | Submitted on 10/12/2008 |
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- Title: A very dark day
- Artist: Invisible_ dark_soul_55
- Description: A little poem or story of a dark day I think would happen.
- Date: 10/12/2008
- Tags: very dark
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Slinkenhofer - 02/11/2012
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Maybe you're confused. Maybe you think poetry is what happens when you're too lazy to write a story?
Really, either put some effort into your work, or don't even write in the first place. - Report As Spam
- vv7722 - 01/02/2012
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Repetitive and predictable.
If you expand it some (give it a story?), or actually write it in poem format, it might be more interesting. 1/5 - Report As Spam
- DanteZephyr - 11/25/2011
- what the hell is that. it looks like a lame intro to a bad novel. seriously this is terrible. 1/5
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- ii_Bambi_xii - 11/05/2011
- what the....no comment -.-
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- Reaper2601 - 10/23/2011
- ur not saying anything just because u put a few words together doesnt mean that they mean anything and this is pathedic and isnt worth reading. it wasnt thought out properly or even written right. i HIGHLY suggest u dont try this anymore or at least think about what ur saying and get some help doing it because u really really need the help...
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- Proserpina16 - 10/02/2011
- what the--??
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