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I put some more eye liner around my red, puffy eyes. I look at my face again. A yellow bruise mocks me in the mirror. I glance around for my blush, and then apply some more to the mocking bruise. It won't happen again! I remember how he said it last night after he made me fall. I hear a loud knocking at the door. I jump up, my eyes alert. I brushed my dress nervously and run to the door. "Hey...” I murmured, making myself look up at his face. His jaw was clenched. "Why don't you come in, Scott?" I asked, my voice slightly shaking. He pushes me out of his way and storms in. Scott goes to the sofa and puts his feet on the coffee table. I slowly walk towards him. "So what are we going to do tonight?" I ask, sounding almost too hopeful we would do something in public. Scott narrows his eyes. He stands up, looking down on me. "So you think every time I come over I am going to spend all my money on you?!" I slump back. "We don't have to do anything expensive. We could go to the park or lake..." I mumbled. His hand flashed across my face. I stumbled back, my mouth agape. Scott glares at me and leaves.
I sit up in my bed, the room still dark. I swing my legs over to the edge and walk over to my mirror. A red handprint shined out on my right cheek. Tears spring to my eyes. I get dressed and go back to my makeup kit, trying to make all my bruises go away. An hour later, everything looks a little better. I sigh, and walk out my door. A crisp wind blows against my little house. I start walking, hoping to get somewhere. A small crowd stands in a driving lot. Farmer's market is printed on a sighn. A smile slightly and sprint over to the market. I stop dead as I saw a guy with dark brown hair and fare green eyes. I find myself walking towards him. He turns around and smiles a dazzling smile. "Hello, I'm John." He says. I grow red, brushing my cheek. "I'm Melody." I murmured. He smiles again, and stares at my cheek in horror.
- by Shimmering_Leaves |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 11/02/2008 |
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- Title: Face down
- Artist: Shimmering_Leaves
- Description: Its about a lady named Melody and her boyfriend is abusive and she is trying to get over it.
- Date: 11/02/2008
- Tags: face down
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Comments (5 Comments)
- x-ChibiSpirit-x - 11/18/2011
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I don't understand what the end was? As far as I can tell, it's just the beginning of something. Also, if that was the end of the abusive relationship, it wasn't very clear. They don't end so easily. Abusive relationships mostly end nastily, with one party or the other trying to hold on, not willing to give up what they had or what they sacrificed their dignity for.
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- tayyounit11xx - 01/17/2010
- Write more! I thought it was sad but interesting. Ending is great.Sequel
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- Xx-Luna-Kitty-xX - 12/23/2008
- agreed must write a sequel!!!
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- ii_Poked_U - 11/11/2008
- its short but sad. i like the end part tho
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- ShiHime-chan - 11/09/2008
- wow you must do a sequel that was really good
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