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I felt the cold winters wind breeze against my face as i left my hiding place in the ground.
The area felt safe but i knew my hunters were pursuing me.
A cold sweat went down my face as i hid behind the trunk of an old oak tree.
I crept out from behind the tree only to hear the galloping of the vampires horses...my hunters.
I ran to a hidden plaine in the forest...at least i thought it was hidden.
I ran down the the hill.I suddenly lost my balance and slipped and rolled down the hill at the end i hit a rock.
To my horror i heard a crack from my leg and looked down. My mud ridden pants were now also soaked in blood. My leg was unable to move.
I swore at myself for not paying attention. Suddenly i heard another crack afraid that it was my other leg i looked down...the leg was fine
but towering over me was Jerimiah...the head hunter. He was a vampire he had sleek black hair,pale face and skin and a pointy tooth grin.
"So you wretched human,you thought you could get away from us? and look what you ended up doing...breaking your fragile leg."he sneered than he
stomped on my broken leg. I screamed out in pain. He scowled at me.
"If you were good and died with your parents you wouldn't have to feel this pain." He snapped.
I looked at him my bright green eyes boring into his black ones
"Oh shut up!" I snarled.
Jerimiah laughed "and what can you do? they died...so what?..they are just humans. " he hissed.
I sat up still staring at him with utter loathing
"why do you freaks do this?" I snarled.
Jerimiah smirked and straddled me stroking my cheek with a cold pale hand.
"Now now boy, you should be thankful i got rid of them." He chuckled.
Just the talk of them made there faces flash back into my memory. There blood all over the
floor....the bite marks...all over my dads body and my mothers screams. And how I barely made it out of there alive.
"You'll pay!" I snarled. The only form of courage i held was because of my wanting of revenge.
"Big talk for such a scrawny human..." He laughed.
"its like you think humans cant do anything!" I spat.
He smiled "They are good for one thing...."he whispered dragging his lips around my jaw.
I remained silent unable to move. He smirked and through the corner off my eye i saw the twinkling of his white fangs in the moonlight looming over my neck.
I started thrashing trying to get away from the most terrible way to die.
"Frost calm yourself...why not meet the same end as your parents?"he chuckled and bite down.
I screamed out in pain...it felt as if acid was pouring into my body filling up my bloodstream.
He pulled away laughing. My vision blurred.
"Humans are great for feasting." he hissed into my ear.
His voice died away along with my vision.
- by midnafreak |
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- | Submitted on 11/08/2008 |
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- Title: The Hunted
- Artist: midnafreak
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A VERY old story i did like a couple months ago. And dont go around saying i stole this from minimidna on deviantart cause im her .-. if you dont believe me message her.
RATE IT HIGH PEOPLE~
HOPE YOU LIKE IT~ - Date: 11/08/2008
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Comments (4 Comments)
- tsunayoshi sawada-chan - 05/07/2011
- O _ O I like it >3 5/5
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- BaeBados - 05/07/2010
- I liked it but may i make a suggestion? Using a thesaurus can REALLY improve a story, Try it sometime =) Other than it seems overdone to me (im just sick of the whole vampires thing) 4/5
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- Kimono325 - 11/26/2008
- Coolnessh. I liked it. It was very different. Ususally not the kind of thing I like, but this is really good.
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- Areishia_01 - 11/22/2008
- I like the ending a lot, to say the truth I wouldn't have liked if Frost came out alive trow some kind of miracle, that's one thing I really hate about some stories, the other is when the heroes seem like super,ultra perfect humans that have no such thing as flaws. So yeah, very cool story.
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