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I pulled my hood up as the artic breeze really hit, and glanced around. Nothing, all was quiet. A long sigh escaped, but was sharply drew in again as movement was seen. Walking wearily over to the movement a spot of crimson, was seen, puzzled i bent down and saw a small pool of blood. I dipped my fingers in carelessly, its usual for blood to be found around here, i was unaware so stupid but, there came a rattling nearby.
"Whos there?" I called out carelessly
The rattling kept getting closer.
Suddenly something, white swerved into my view. As it came closer i noticed it was a boy, very pale he was, but extremely handsome, he was basically the man of my dreams.
I stared and stared oblivios to the red streaming down his chin as he came closer. He leaned in, i thought all my dreams had come true, exept his mouth went to my neck and closer to where the blood was steadily pulsing through my veins.
- by IHideInShadows |
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- | Submitted on 11/21/2008 |
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- Title: Hidden
- Artist: IHideInShadows
- Description: Hope you like it! Its based on the part of Twilight where there was a mass murderer killing people in seatle and basiacally this girls a victim. If you havent read any of the Twilights, maybe you'll get what this story is about anyway. Again Enjoy!! And maybe some constructive crtitism (wow what a mouth fulll) or something? ^-^
- Date: 11/21/2008
- Tags: hiddenvampiretwilightgothlilly
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Cepheius - 02/06/2009
- no originality IT SUCKS!
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- IHideInShadows - 11/28/2008
- Thanks! ^-^
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- aznmaria - 11/28/2008
- good job i love it you should have a thousand comments every day
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