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today was my last day at the "academy" and it was horrible! all of my friends ignored me because I'm different now, and i don't like being different. by the way my name is zeo. i was trapped in the academy for "gifted" students. well I'm getting ahead of myself , so lets start at the beginning. this is how the story starts...
as my mom says "zeo! you need to get to school today it is your first in all." well i disagree with her today i don't like going to school after what happened at the last school. i remember what happened so clearly and thoroughly that it makes me cry. as zeo began to go trough his memories he began to cry. "why did i have to go to school that day." he began to question the past and think of what might have happened that day."if i would have got their earlier she would have still been alive and i would still have her here with me." he began to cry harder as he got deeper in his memories. as he walked down the street he bumped into a beautiful young lady." crud i dropped my books!" he cleared his eyes as he began to speak with the young lady "I'm sorry i wasn't watching where i was going." "no you weren't watching where you were going now help me pick up my books before I'm late for school!" they both began to pick up the books and he asked he, "what's your name anyways?" as she was about to answer her boyfriend came by and saw them both. "hey kid what are you doing with my girlfriend!" "um i was just..." "punk I'm going to flatten your face into the pavement!" "please don't do it he was just helping me pick up my books." as she told her boyfriend the story zeo began to take the offensive side and threw a punch. "take that you jerk!" after i threw that punch i wished that i hadn't talked to he in the first place. "dweeb you shouldn't pick a fight you cant win!" as i lied their i uttered the few words i had left to say. "jerks like you shouldn't be with a nice girl like that and who said i was done anyways!" i got back up just to get punched in the face. "was that suppose to hurt!" the man who i started to fight with began to summon energy and strength from the air! "now I'm going to destroy every bone in your body kid and by the way my name is jack!" jack began to swing and miss on purpose. every time he missed me i felt a bone in my body break. " what you missed me and I'm still bleeding!" jack explained it to me he was born with the power to strike a person or miss and still break bones. "so that is what a vinga is!" he kept on attacking me and summoning more of his powers to attack me with. "ahhh this isn't going to end well is it?" he broke almost every bone in my body before i felt a serge of power go trough my body. "am i a vigna?" with this question going trough my head i attacked ruthlessly and did not stop until i know that he wouldn't get back up."I'm so sorry about your boyfriend and i still never heard your name."
right when she was going to tell me her name the bell rung."oh man im going to be late for my first day of school!"
to be continued...
- by animalking10 |
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- | Submitted on 01/26/2009 |
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- Title: final stop
- Artist: animalking10
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Description:
this story is short and i just made it up but it is still good!
comment on this story and tell me what i need to do to improve on it!
please don't be mean. - Date: 01/26/2009
- Tags: final stop
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- inklegend - 05/23/2009
- A few spelling errors but other than that not bad.
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