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"When will we get there?" said an exausted Chaos.
"We get there when we get there Chaos, now stop whining."
"Oh come on Hunter weve been walking for 5 days nonstop now cant we take a break?"
"I dont need one, but if you want one take it but im not waiting for you."
"AWWWW MAN why the hell are you so one track minded?"
"What?"
"I mean all you think about is yourself you have no compassion for anyone else."
"To me compassion is a weekness, thats why I dont have any."
"Well we are in the middle of a grassland there is not a soul in sight and im positive that even you are a bit exausted eventhough you dont want to admitt it."
Hunter stops alowwing Chaos to accedentaly bump into her.
"Chaos."
"Huh yes?"
"Rest. If your exausted your of NO use to me for as powerfull as i am i know i will need help to defeat the evil one that resides in the Cave of Regret."
"OH THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!!!!" saying this Chaos jumps on Hunter knocking her down onto the moist green grass.
"Ok ok you can get off of me now."
"Sorry Hunter." Saying this Chaos gets off Hunter.
"Ok Chaos tell me whats your reason for wanting to come with me? And dont lie to me you know i know when ppl lie to me."
Chaos gulps. "Ok im not going to lie to you. The reason I wanted to join you was because I got banned from my village. And everywere I went I got rejected. noone would talk to me and the few that did werent very nice. Though i did find onr man that was very kind and knowing that i got banned from the village he still took me in. Though I left as soon as i heard your rumor going around."
"Ok Chaos now enlighten me on why it is that you got banned?"
"Well the truth is..."
Just then a group of heavily armord and highly dangerous group of bandits comes out of nowere and attacks the group.
"Bandits!" Hunter yells "DIE!!!" And hunter kills 4 of the 15 bandits befor Chaos even prepares her first katana.
"Hunter wait ill help you."
But its to late by the time Chaos gets to her Hunter already killed 14 bandits and crippled the clear leader.
"Alright talk who sent you?"
With a disresptful look on his face he spits at Hunter.
"Ill never tell a low live such as you."
upon hearing this Hunter turn furious and with her bare hands rips off the bandits right arm.
"AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!"
"This is your last chance who sent you?" Yells Hunter.
"Heh il never talk id rather die."
Hunter laughs.
"Fine have it your way."
Hunter still furious rips of the bandits left leg again with her bare hands. Then she draws one of her blades and grabs the bandit by his neck.
"He he he i havnt dont this in a while."
The next thing the shoked Chaos sees is Hunter slashing the bandits stomach a multitude of times befor impaling the blade in his stomach and releasing the neck. Then without mercy Hunter lifts the blade spitting the bandits stomach, chest, and head in half.
"What Chaos you look suprised?"
Chaos speechless at the sight falls to her knees.
"Hmpf he and his little gan had it coming."
And with that Hunter returns to the rest site befor the tiny battle and starts a fire as it has gotten dark.
- by Hunter McQueen |
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- | Submitted on 02/07/2009 |
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- Title: The Keeper Ch: 2
- Artist: Hunter McQueen
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The second part of my story.
Please rate and remember Comments are always appreciated. - Date: 02/07/2009
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Lolita the Vampire - 02/19/2009
- your characters are one dimensional
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- Dante Pandorum - 02/13/2009
- nice.
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