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My legs were aching, but for as much running as I was doing, it was acceptable. The only sounds were muffled foot fals and my labored breathing.
'For him,' I thought as I pushed myself harder. I was sure they were following me now. 'I would have only done it for him.' I thought as one sorrow filled tear slid down my face.
Amber was a normal 13 year old who was cruely thrown into a romantic partnership with Logan, a fire for hair and tranquilizing, ice blue eyes, 13 year old boy. But when she discovers what he is, better yet what she is her world was turn upside down. After Logans disapearance about three months after they met, She throws her whole exsistance into finding him.
Now, you vote, 1- 10 on writing, then romance, horror, sad, or a mix. And I want some addvice on what you want to read.
- by Amberlover77 |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 02/08/2009 |
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Gator-aide - 02/09/2009
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Tis short, but I suppose enjoyable. I didn't feel that you put your heart into your writting though. A few mistakes, but with effort and the right encouragment your writting will become better.
Your story is to fast moving, take the time the describe more in detail. I didn't understand the setting she was placed in and where she was, twould be well if you could describe that through Amber's eyes. - Report As Spam
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