- One day a girl named isabela came around a mountain and climbed it she went into a cave isabela fanted she woke up and said "what happened?" and looked at her watch she said "oh my god i got to go im going to be late for dinner" she saw a rose siting there growing in a crack on the cement. isabela woundered what it was doing there. so she took it isabela fell and was bleeding. everyone began to worry and started to dress in black and white isabela was never seen again.
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- | Submitted on 02/27/2009 |
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- Title: The Rose
- Artist: the_hell_master_1234
- Description: this one girl finds that she is in a cave and sees a rose she touched it and she died if any one seen the note she would live.
- Date: 02/27/2009
- Tags: rose
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Comments (7 Comments)
- sugoipeach - 11/04/2010
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You should probably work on your grammar. :3
Other than that, it wasn't very descriptive. sad - Report As Spam
- xoxkenny93xox - 03/12/2009
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use a little more puntuation so it makes sense.
other then that it's a great idea ^^ - Report As Spam
- meerodi - 03/09/2009
- It's so short o.0 I agree that you should write more about the story, add more details, and so on.
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- x-x-ii-Fweshh-x-x - 03/01/2009
- kool
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- ll LoveStruck ll - 02/27/2009
- It's okay I guess. But shouldn't you make more details?? Or what else happened??? But other than that, I love it! =]
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- Deadly FireCracker - 02/27/2009
- ummm i dont really get it....-.-
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- jaketo123 - 02/27/2009
- sweet biggrin
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