Hope is

• Artist: Reya Dawn
• Description: Feedback is appreciated. Poetry isn't my strongest forte and I'd like to become better at it.
  
  Hope you like it. (Pun... not intended)
• Date: 03/09/2009
• Tags: hope

Hope is the pure white wings,
Shielding you from harm.

Hope is the never ending sky,
Hidden at times by the darkness
But never truly gone.

Hope is the loving dove,
The caring mother,
The soft words of encouragement
Coming from a valued friend.

Hope is the point from which
All things positive originate.

Hope is Love and kindness.

Hope is Joy.

Hope is ever lasting.

Comments

[jukupukucat]

i love it, it is hard for me to be optimistic but i never lose hope even though my life is a mess of horrible people pinning me down

[soleggiato]

that was really nice. 5/5

[Marisa Chuikova]

-_-
not bad

[Ebrathral_Mars Dragon God]

very clever i enjoyed this poem very much and im a hard person to impress if it would allow me to give u a rating i would have to give u a 5/5 for this master piece good luck to u it was very excellent poetry i want to see more of ur work poetry comes from the heart and u obvisly have a bautiful heart to create this master piece

[MaryJeanStar]

Excellent poetry.
This part tripped rhythm-wise: "All things positive originate." It was slight, but felt odd when read out loud.
Besides that, your optimistic message stands strong and well worded.

[emmaispretty123]

very good....

[vv7722]

Very inspirational.
BTW poetry is your strongest forte if it is your passion.