- sighing she stood from where she sat praying sensing the sun was to rise soon with a flick of her tail she turned stalking away she heard the sound of crying she drank it in suddenly she stopped remembering her life when she was still alive her life and love she remembered watching her love being murdered infront of her very eyes and not even lifting a finger she remembered being stabbed in the back as she remembered this tears of blood ran down her face she hated what she did what she was snapping from her daze she noticed the rays of light she ran from the light remembering what had been said and done wishing she had gone into eternal purgatory instead of being turned into the most hated creature ever a shade not just any shade the shade of sorrow
- by lithiummistressofhell2009 |
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- | Submitted on 03/28/2009 |
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- Title: shade of sorrow
- Artist: lithiummistressofhell2009
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- Date: 03/28/2009
- Tags: shade sorrow
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Kidasa - 05/18/2009
- this is very good, but if I can sugjest explaining what she is and why she is hiding... I was a little confused on that part..... But I loved you description! smile
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- AquaDuelist - 04/03/2009
- punctuation marks help
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