sun set

• Artist: queen borghild
• Description: i am righting a book and this is the end of it
  tell me what you think :)
• Date: 05/29/2009
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I opend my eyes and relized that this was the moment I wished for I was riding my love in his second form into the sun set and this is what I agreed to. I agreed that I loved him and that I will all ways love him in eather form. For he was my life now and I was his forever and ever and ever.......

Comments

[J-Hoax]

No. You are supposed to WRITE books. If you want to right something then right a wrong.
Other than the spelling and grammar issues. Not bad but not Good, either.

[shayerahol22]

:c You should probably check on some of those run on sentences. Also, you're only supposed to use three periods in a row. Any more is incorrect.

Oh, and it's 'either', not 'eather'.